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Tom Pixton's avatar

this is just ugly. I"m sorry I read it.

Jeff Hardy's avatar

I really wanted to like this Mormon horror story, but I feel the story is very cliched, purple prose, a “dark and stormy night” kind of feel. Whatever it is that is possessing the people in the story is completely inexplicable. I feel like we need at least a hint of an idea as to what is going on.

William Gentry's avatar

Matthew 8:24-38. Thought it was rather clear he was referencing that story.