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Clifton H. Jolley, Ph.D.'s avatar

Lovely. Deft. “Little” is an unnecessary adjectival, leaning towards sentimental.

James Goldberg's avatar

Ah, but “little” pulls up Matthew 18:3 in my mind. Remove that word and the whole Kingdom might slip away.

The poem is more than words. It’s anointing my eyes to watch the kids during sacrament and see God.